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I just kinda had an idea for a modern tragedy story, so I just decided to roll with it, really. Not sure if this one is great, but I kinda like how it turned out.
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A crime is a crime, but what if it is for the greater good?
Thoughtful, saddening, and just plain amazing. You made me feel for Laura and Eis, even for his two buds, Al and Dren. The ending feels a little rushed, but isn't, in a way.
If only I could weave this kind of prose...
Verdict:Transcendently Perfect.
Thoughtful, saddening, and just plain amazing. You made me feel for Laura and Eis, even for his two buds, Al and Dren. The ending feels a little rushed, but isn't, in a way.
If only I could weave this kind of prose...
Verdict:Transcendently Perfect.